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Return to innocence by VasiDgallery Return to innocence by VasiDgallery
Everything is connected, each word, each branch. Each poem, drawn and held together by the thread of our own experience, and the longing of our own Soul to follow the vine back to its root.We are all child of universe, no lees than the trees and the stars.Keep peace in your soul, return to innocence!
This my story for contest in [link] I GIVE YOU THE SONG, YOU GIVE ME THE STORY Held by:iconpaul-gore:by the beutiful song [link]
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Hey!

As I tell everyone I write a critique for; don't mind the ratings, they aren't informative.

Photographically:
When it comes to floral-photography and still-life in general to make an exceptionalphoto it requires a lot of creativity and time. I recommend you to have a look at other still-life images and find those you like and think through how they accomplished their result (was it the angle, the lighting, the colors etc).
Spesific for this image you have to be aware that if you are going to photograph something that contains details at this level or even more detailed level you need to use a tripod or something sturdy and preferable self-timer or remote-release to be able to obtain the sharpest possible capture.
When it comes to the framing I recommend you to have a look at how your favorite flower-photos look like as mentioned above.

Post-processing:
To make this image as it is pop a little more I would recommend you to blur the leaf at the bottom, it's very close to the rose and draws unwanted attention.
I would also encourage you to up the vibrance a little, so you make the image look more lively.
Also selective sharpening on the rose would be nice, because it's a little undefined right now.

All in all this is a nice capture, and as mentioned above I recommend you to try different approaches to achieve extraordinary captures in the future :)

I hope this was helpful :)
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creativemikey Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Professional Photographer
:heart:
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:iconvasidgallery:
VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
:hug:
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:iconblueivyviolet:
BlueIvyViolet Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
beautiful!!
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:iconvasidgallery:
VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
Thank you :iconcip33:
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:iconblueivyviolet:
BlueIvyViolet Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
welcome hon!!
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BlueIvyViolet Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
very pretty!!
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:iconvasidgallery:
VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
:iconthanku-plz::iconcip33:
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:iconblueivyviolet:
BlueIvyViolet Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
my pleasure hon!:hug:
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FallesenPhotography Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
Beautiful color and detail in this photo.
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:iconvasidgallery:
VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
Thanks so much, Jewels :hug:
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FallesenPhotography Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
You're welcome. :)
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MadOldHag Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I tried to figure out how the title might be interpreted, then gave it up.

Beautiful shot, I like how the light comes from this particular angle (not sure how to phrase what I mean) and how you show that this rose, even though it is hanging a bit, still is beautiful. The color looks like someone must have painted it, but again, nature itself is the best painter. Such a beautiful color ...
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VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
I can not thank you enough for your comment
True, is a freshman who survived the first snow, still beautiful
And indeed nature is the best artist...
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:iconmadoldhag:
MadOldHag Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I didn't know that. This rose must have a strong will to survive indeed. In a way, this makes it even more beautiful.
You are welcome. :-)
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Sam-432 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student Photographer
beautiful
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:iconvasidgallery:
VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
:iconthanku-plz:
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TeaPhotography Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Professional General Artist
Just stunning! :clap:
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:iconvasidgallery:
VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
Thanks, Tea :iconredroseplz:
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SarahharaS1 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
This is lovely :icongiveflowerplz:
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:iconvasidgallery:
VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
Kindly thanks!:heart:
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SarahharaS1 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
My pleasure :D
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motherearth01 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Stunning shot!
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:iconvasidgallery:
VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
Oh, thank you!:heart:
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motherearth01 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
You're most welcome!
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mikestevenson1955 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Whey oh whey whey oh whey whey yeah...sorry, it's the Enigma song that goes with the title of this piece!
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:iconvasidgallery:
VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Enigma song was in my mind, thanks for lovely comment!:hug:
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ArtBYbeverly Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Wow, just beautiful :)
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:iconvasidgallery:
VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Thank you :hug:
I found this rosebud almost buried in snow :)
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:iconartbybeverly:
ArtBYbeverly Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Wow, it was a fighter then...like it was just waiting to be eternally captured like you have! :)
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COLOREDINLOVE Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love the sweetness of the picture...your photos are gorgeous!! Thanks for the love too sweetie!!:heart::hug:
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:iconvasidgallery:
VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Oh, I thank you :iconwhiteroseplz:
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MichaelWehar Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
So cool! :D
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:iconvasidgallery:
VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Thanks!:rose:
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MichaelWehar Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome :D
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Lady-Compassion Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconbouquetplz: Prettiest thing I have seen today!
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:iconvasidgallery:
VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Thanks so much :blowkiss:
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LUCILALEYLA Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Gorgeous :love:
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VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Thanks so much, Lucila!:blowkiss:
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LUCILALEYLA Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
My pleasure :huggle:
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AreaFive Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful :)
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VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Thanks, as allways you are very kind :heart:
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