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January 1, 2013
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Make
NIKON
Model
COOLPIX S8000
Shutter Speed
10/6400 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
11 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Dec 25, 2012, 12:58:00 PM
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Microsoft Windows Photo Gallery 6.0.6001.18000
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Return to innocence by VasiDgallery Return to innocence by VasiDgallery
Everything is connected, each word, each branch. Each poem, drawn and held together by the thread of our own experience, and the longing of our own Soul to follow the vine back to its root.We are all child of universe, no lees than the trees and the stars.Keep peace in your soul, return to innocence!
This my story for contest in [link] I GIVE YOU THE SONG, YOU GIVE ME THE STORY Held by:iconpaul-gore:by the beutiful song [link]
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Hey!

As I tell everyone I write a critique for; don't mind the ratings, they aren't informative.

Photographically:
When it comes to floral-photography and still-life in general to make an exceptionalphoto it requires a lot of creativity and time. I recommend you to have a look at other still-life images and find those you like and think through how they accomplished their result (was it the angle, the lighting, the colors etc).
Spesific for this image you have to be aware that if you are going to photograph something that contains details at this level or even more detailed level you need to use a tripod or something sturdy and preferable self-timer or remote-release to be able to obtain the sharpest possible capture.
When it comes to the framing I recommend you to have a look at how your favorite flower-photos look like as mentioned above.

Post-processing:
To make this image as it is pop a little more I would recommend you to blur the leaf at the bottom, it's very close to the rose and draws unwanted attention.
I would also encourage you to up the vibrance a little, so you make the image look more lively.
Also selective sharpening on the rose would be nice, because it's a little undefined right now.

All in all this is a nice capture, and as mentioned above I recommend you to try different approaches to achieve extraordinary captures in the future :)

I hope this was helpful :)
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creativemikey Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Professional Photographer
:heart:
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VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
:hug:
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BlueIvyViolet Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
beautiful!!
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VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
Thank you :iconcip33:
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BlueIvyViolet Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
welcome hon!!
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BlueIvyViolet Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
very pretty!!
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VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
:iconthanku-plz::iconcip33:
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BlueIvyViolet Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
my pleasure hon!:hug:
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FallesenPhotography Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
Beautiful color and detail in this photo.
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VasiDgallery Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
Thanks so much, Jewels :hug:
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